Paul G. Bens, Jr.
Original Fiction That's Just Slightly Bent
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What the critics said about

Mahape a ale Wala‘au

“Many, many stories claim to be erotic - most do less than nothing for me, being pedestrian, boring and the opposite of arousing. This one is sensuality distilled, and like all good writing, transcends its genre.”

                                        -- Ann Somerville at Uniquely Pleasurable

“The setting is wonderful, it seems like you can smell the perfumes and feel the joys of Toshi's vacation…” 
  
          
                                        -- Elisa Rolle at Live Journal

“With exquisitely crafted words, the author lovingly creates a lush, lavish and inviting world for us, intensely stimulating our senses…”    
                    
                                       
                                         -- angusdevotee at AngusDevotee.net

“It's almost like watching the waves on the beach, steady, soothing, but undeniably powerful...”

                                        --  Jaime Samms at Live Journal

“The emotional depth and the sensual aspect of Mahape a ale Wala‘au was so well blended that it fairly steamed my computer in more ways then one…Five Delightful Divas.”

                                        -- Sage Whistler at Dark Diva Reviews

"[Bens] shows us the sights and sounds and smells of the island, introduces us to its people and its customs, in such a way that the sense of place almost becomes a character in its own right." 

                                        
-- surya at Live Journal

"Lyrical, almost musical prose, that does more in 10k than most stories do in 80."

                                        
-- Book Utopia Mom at Book Utopia

"...excellent...a delightful read!"

                                        
-- Rose at Romance at Heart Magazine

"I have this feeling that Paul G Bens can write a book about paint drying on a wall and I will still hang on to every word because the prose is lush, like a delicious and intoxicating drink that I can easily get drunk on."

                                       
-- Mrs. Giggles at MrsGiggles.com

"Not your typical short vacation encounter this is deeply personal for the participants."

                                        -- Aris at Alternative Read

"This is a polished jewel of a short story where every word is placed with precision exactly where it needs to be."

                                        -- Val Kovalin at Obsidianbookshelf.com


"The author paints a lovely picture of the island and the blossoming of the narrator. The buildup is exquisite, and the sex scene is satisfying."

                                        -- Ivy at Manic Readers


"Mr. Bens has written a keeper as far as I am concerned and I look forward to many more satisfying reads from this author in the near future....5 cups."

                                        -- Regina at Coffee Time Romance & More


"I recommend this story to everyone; but especially for those who have ever wanted to step away from their lives, just
for a moment!
"

                                        -- Brett at Rainbow Reviews

"This story seems to be good for reading on the run, and exhibits the experience of a man stepping out of his normal niche to enjoy life."

                                        -- Linda Yau at JLHLS

"Heartfelt, intense and beautiful, this is writing of the highest quality. Well recommended and for me, this one’s a keeper...5 Champagne Flutes."

                                        --Singapore Sling at Cocktail Reviews

"As I went along with the characters on their ride I realized what a superb storyteller Paul G. Bens, Jr. is as he paints pictures the way an artist does on a canvas."

                                        --Jesse Wave at Reviews by Jesse Wave

You can also catch up with Paul at his livejournal or at his blogspot

 
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